Floating perfection
upon this river of doubt
displaying serenity and devotion
with every ivory step
during the garnet midnight hour
As she makes her way
through guttered souls
to her tree of creation
illuminating minds
to her presence
during these heinous times
From which every era
she reaches her destination
luring beings to eternal rest
with her enchanting music
drifting
caressing genteel hearts
into utter elation
Author notes
Prompt:
artwork by = flordelys
A contest entry
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Comments
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well written. flowing off the tongue. rich with meaning and depth..awesome write. Hugs Angel
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wonderful poem. terrific imagery
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This is poem is amazing. I can see why this took gold, I was captured by the surreal earthy imagery. It was very deep and rich. The flow of the poem was smooth and gentle as one eyes moved from line to line. Brilliant poem, Thank you for entering and good luck!
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beautiful poem floating perfection upon this river of doubt with every ivory step during the garnet midnight hour good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing your poem with the group
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good job with the prompt. Hope you do well in the contest and thanks for sharing this with the library.
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Nicely done with your prompt!
Good luck in the contest.
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wow!!
so good!!
welcome to the finalist list XD
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beautiful
A reassuring reminder that She is still here with us, steady and constant, ready to relieve our battered souls when we are ready to come home to her.
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