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Hakuna Matata

N  o worries, enjoy the afternoo N

O bviously, it's what I like to d O

 

W hatever way the winds have me blo W

O  bligingly, I pick up and g O

R elaxing on the hood of my ca R

R olling along, no matter how fa R

I  believe in charma, have faith in ch I

E nough to enjoy nothing bothering m E

S o sit down,  let's make some memorie S

Author notes

Prompt Mirror Acrostic

it reads no worries with the first and last letters of every line when read up and down, and I rhymed, though often acrostics do not.

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  • trekkergirls bank
    June 18

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    I bet that this was hard to write. You did very well. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    this was cool you did a very great awesome job good luck to you in the contest


  • PatheticKt
    July 26, 2008

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    I agree, this is an amazing shadow acrostic!
    I've never seen a rhyming acrostic and I actually thought it would be impossible to write one . . .
    . . . but it's not one of my thoughts anymore based from reading this
    Glad to read this piece, all right ^^


  • Darkwell
    July 25, 2008

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    this is such an awesome acroteleostic. its got a real reggae beat to it too. lovely message and penning here

    Such
    Wonderfully
    Evolving
    Expressive
    Tones


    WTG! Good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    Well done that you managed to get this to rhyme also!! A lovely relaxing and carefree feeling to this!


  • JinSays gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    WOW!
    Another Mirrored Acrostic! How do ya'll do that?
    Amazing!
    The message is wonderful, and having little kids, I sure needed it!
    Thank you,
    Jin


  • alandriel1138
    April 9, 2008

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    wow this is awesome. i was thinking how hard it would be to make one of these rhyme. and you used the phrase and meaning to complete it. you did such a great job! good luck in the contest!


  • Upstairs
    March 31, 2008

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    I love acrostics..and this one is great!
    What a good message..thanks for sharing, it truly brightened my day

    I really need to try writing one of these..


  • righteousme
    March 31, 2008

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    GREAT!!!! loved it... and WOW you are good at these things... i need to write some acrostics ... great write... great read...


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 30, 2008

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    Great job with the mirrored acrostic i haven't tried this yet Good luck in the Lad's contest hope you do well. Thanks for your comment Christina hehe thats my real sisters name

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