attained
by wink of eye
feelings erupt as explosions
and, like mind
they grow vile within
but,
feelings
are jewels
ready to take flight
and, like delicacies
they spear the withered heart
embracing the soul
rejuvenating the mind
A contest entry
- Astonish Me! by Touchof1der.
525 points, ended March 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The elegance of this piece radiates with a light that quenches the thirst of the pallet with a delicate rain that is just enough. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
How well you word ...
the power of the mind, when linked to the heart! Absolutely wondrous!
Edengroete
Myra
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Ah, your mind does seem
to find rejeuvenation
in both sparkling and piercing
manner. Indeed, astonishing!!!!
Aesthete
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