Being in the shadows
Of not knowing that I existed.
Looking around to see whats real
Only to find a sorrowful meaning.
Having a want to know what is real
I need to know how it may feel.
Not being able to be seen by you
That I just float on by like a flake.
I want to know if you can see me
Or am I just one of those who can't be?
Author notes
I couldn't think of anything else.
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by Perfectly Imperfect.
300 points, ended April 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is good. Short and simple, but effective. Great take on the prompt
Well done and thank you for entering x
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this is short but good. It really explanes well the sense of being alone. So sad. great work Forrest Vampire Child that I call friend Kelsey!
*peace*
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Very good to me this communicates a sort of feeling of being left out, and i like it a lot
fine work
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Thanks! I ran out of ideas though
But thanks again.
The forrest vampire child.
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