As Satanic forces sing songs,
humanity bleeds to death.
Flinty vultures dance
on carcass body remains
spreading wings of laughter.
Echoed negatives
mirror illusions
even for beautiful imageries.
Sharp teeth of lust
bite the love essence
by tricky camouflaging
and soft feelings die.
Dark countenances then
bring in slavery of souls
for hellish delight
and lure others to grow.
Harmonious ripples
make hasty retreat
and blacks enwrap souls.
Volcano erupts
as punishment by God
and the Earth vanishes.
Do you wish this to happen?
Stop, look and listen;
try to make amends.
Author notes
Manoj Sanyal
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes from my Faves!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
675 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a powerful piece of thought laid open for contemplation, truly something to ponder. A dark expression of truths that some may not want to hear, though the relevance of this depth is ever conscious of us. Very well spoken. Thank you for your entry!
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I really enjoyed the imagery of this poem. Your words speak of a truth that I wish more people would acknowledge.
Thanks for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,
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what a powerful immagery and the strucrture of the content you brougt..quite impressive and effective as well....
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Thank you.
Have nice time.
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I like the shadow feeling and uniqueness of this piece.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
HENSLEY
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