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Drowning In This Love


No prayer can ease this pain
No one can fill this place
in my heart
Like he does
The sound of his voice haunts
my soul
I feel it beat through my veins
In your shadow I await
For him to love me the way I do
him
My very existence is fading away
All that lives inside this tormented
dream
Are the memories of him
Playing like a broken melody
Of love's sweet obsession
Like a moth to the flame
I am drawn to his heavenly embrace
Yet its only a trick of the mind
For he is not here with me
A night so cold
Please wont you say those
three words
Before death takes me
Kiss me with a thousand kisses
Just one look into his eyes
Has me hypnotized
Just one kiss
And I would be ready to die
Caught in his exquisite
beauty
Enchanted by cupid arrows
Like I am floating in the air
No where to land but in those
arms
With one brush of his skin
Sets me on fire
Please don't smile at me the
way you do
For I fear I shall
Never stop drowning in this
love I have
Rescue me please from this
sea
With just the three words I long
So desperately to hear..

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  • Perfectly Imperfect
    April 1, 2008

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    This is a sad write, a really good take on the prompt. I can relate a lot Well done and thank you very much for entering x