Read between the lies
Seeing is believing
she saw him
she belived him
Everything he told her
Only brought her down farther
Until she fell
from loving grace
to a forgotten place
left only to look upon
the place that had banished her:
the limitless sky
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie!! 15 poets only! 2 Options! by Kassandra Nyktos.
600 points, ended March 30, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Don't bash. She looked like a fallen angel to me
Comments
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Firstly, this was interesting. I liked it, yet it wasn't....wow worthy. But still , good write.
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belived is mispelled
good write, fine images
I like it
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I love the beggining Good write.
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