with a crying moon in mirror of velvet night,
stars fall dying embers
…faith
does not know our names
we are two doves-
tossing crystal stones in a burgundy river of pain
and to a bed of ivy,
we bleed love’s pearls into a sea of lonely
…for a moment
our worlds, become same.
Author notes
This poem is a created from the word bank provided;
Mirror Velvet Dove(s)
Embers Burgundy Faith
Stones Pain Bleed
Ivy Crystal Pearls
A contest entry
- Let's Do Dark by Dalaney.
900 points, ended April 8, 2008, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good indeed. Congratulations on the bronze.
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incredible. you have the ability
to make me shift and sigh with just
a word...i love this. love, lane
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This is just absolutly beautiful.
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You did a brilliant job. Especially with a words bank. I would have never known. Very nicely done. Good luck.
Kelli
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what a lovely poem, such a good use of the words provided
thanks for sharing
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Such an impact! The word bankI know is relevant, but you used the words so eloquently, there are hardly any filler words. Wonderful accomplishment! Always remember, you are never alone. Happy Birthday to me! and best wishes to you!
Shana
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Impact!
If I hadn't known that this was a word bank I would have still thought it was amazing which makes me think... a good experiment to try sometime might be to create your own word bank and then try to write from it? Awesome job!
"The Moon and I" Great title too!
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thanks bro...guess I should add that word bank to the A notes...I once took a sixty word bank and wrote a fabulous poem using all of them...when I was new to this site...Ive not done a word bank in over a year...always loved doing them...good idea...make your own and write to it..
Mal
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