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Look to the Sky

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Finding herself in this landscape of darkness
Losing herself in the voice of the past
Her eyes track the tears she once cried for her death
But she can't comprehend or remember their fall

She's locked up, alone, in the thing she's become
Her soft tongue caresses the fangs she was given
Yet she doesn't quite know the source of this hunger
This want to replace the blue twilight with fire

Her cross is enough to protect from herself
But not quite enough to keep out the dark

The sadness still finds the way to her eyes
And keeps them the blue of the sky she has lost

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  • Devilish Temptation
    August 3, 2008

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    Love another piece of yours you should publish your works because I would buy the book. It shines Talent, Bronze you should of got GOLD


  • squirrelgirl
    April 6, 2008

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    Woot! Great job on getting bronze!
    "Look to the sky" eh?
    That's interesting.
    May your pencil never break!
    ~squirrel~


  • emotina
    April 6, 2008
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    beautiful♥


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 30, 2008

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    wow, very good write, I love the way you ended it:

    The sadness still finds the way to her eyes
    And keeps them the blue of the sky she has lost

    It was a perfect way to end the poem, and I loved reading it.