beesting on back of my
hand looked at, I noticed
maternal cameo metal wedding ring;
wondered miserable cause effect
scenario of miscarriage again
yet out of balance equals poison
sometimes has to calibrate thought
overall like count feelings
out with gassed breath
that can be deep not qualms,
as mamma reaquainting
rhythm with daughter
rather than chemical sensitive task
of shawl masking by taxing touch
around others with an official
cleaning near guest homeschooling
with emotions aside math unshallow...
a fly crawled in the window
groove tracks and I felt breeze changes
way one would not tug on a blanket
in cosleeping, or broader patience
and I ache over derangement of range
I make but know too proper building
codes that are changed by chewing time --
Author notes
I don't know if this affected you as thunder,
but no applause symbols please
alongside simplifying comments
to be without unnatural emoticons, thank you
I've reckoned to not use good luck; Isaiah 65:11
A contest entry
- Astonish Me! by Touchof1der.
525 points, ended March 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
the turned rise can be different from your angle
Comments
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I must admit, your poem leaves me pondering the deeper meaning and inspiration of this piece. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der

