Lost within the lies
Onward she desperately crawls
Seeking out satisfaction
The one thing to make her whole
Sacrificing her innocence
On the altar of desperation
Undeniably shattered
Losing pieces of her soul
Author notes
Option 1
First letter acrostic:
L
O
S
T
S
O
U
L
Just some thoughts about the world today, those that are lost and the desperate things they will do to fill the void.
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is a wonderful acrostic. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Acrostics can sound forced but yours flowed very well. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Very lovely write. this is quite beautiful. its even an acrostic, doen't seem like it cause its not forced(thats a good thing)
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Wow, lovely write, greatly appreciated.
I love the way you ended this, it was amazing.
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