If you see me walking in the rain
please just pass me by
I'm trying to wash away the pain
I heard in her good-bye
I like the rain
I know storms don't last forever
and blue skys turn from gray
But when I read your letter
I knew it wouldn't be today
I like the rain
So if you see me walkin
please just pass me by
I don't feel like talkin
I just want to cry
I like the rain
As the tears run down my face
it's like bits of you are leaving
As they wash away the taste
of love I wont be feeling
I like the rain
It's natures way of healing
it washes away the stain
Of memories I'm feeling
I like the rain
So if you see me walkin
please just pass me by
I don't feel like talkin
I'm just tryin to say good-bye
I like the rain
A contest entry
- Inspiration lost in the Dark by Sia.
450 points, ended April 20, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This is really wonderful. I love poems about the rain and nature. I loved your use of repetition. Lovely poem, Good luck in the contest @>}- -
I think this is one of you best lamenting poems. I love the second stanza- knowing the storm will pass, but knowing it won't be right away- it reminds us to keep hope, even when feeling so desolate. This was easy to relate to- I liked it very much.
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This poem has so much effect on me...
Grace -
This is wonderful as always. Your a wonderful writer, and this poem touches somewhat in my own life, my only thing is, I'm as close to saying good bye as I'll ever be. Koodles
Blessed be
Mystic
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beautifully painful...
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