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Stop, Look, Listen





pause,
your long stride
    as you once did.


glance,
and let your line of sight
            strike me again.

hear,
me crying silently
      like you always have.



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Prompt: Stop, look, and listen

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  • Virgoan
    April 2, 2008

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    Short yet there is so much to be seen and heard. wonderful write

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

    HENSLEY