here is where the lilacs fall
they fall from this orchard wall
they fall to he broken hearts below
lost in the winds with the dirt in tow
dragged along the ground so long
done with the game that we call love
never again shall I feel this way
the way that I felt for him today
he shot me down and made me cry
I wont love again until I die
lost in the winds with the dirt in tow
my heart is there with the other lost souls
we gave up and again were last
no one will change the past
dragged along by this dirt in tow
I felt my all time low
here is where the lilacs fall
they fall from this orchard wall
they fall to he broken hearts below
lost in the winds with the dirt in tow
Author notes
done quickly
Comments
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I realize this was done quickly, but here are the spelling/grammatical errors.
"they fall to he broken hearts below"
"he" I do believe, should be the.
"I wont love again until I die"
Just missed the apostrophe in won't.
This is gorgeous; I kid you not. It flows smoothly and I could feel it. I adore the first/last stanza. Repeating it added to this piece.
Good luck in the contest!
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