How fortunate!
I found you
while looking for me.
How strange to be blessed
regardless of my selfish, girly ways.
I found you
while looking for me.
How strange to be blessed
regardless of my selfish, girly ways.
A contest entry
- PIF by Age of Rain.
425 points, ended March 31, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Ask me no questions, I'll tell you no lies.
Comments
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I love the lines...how fortunate I found you while looking for me...so many times when we search our own souls we find the most wonderful people who want in...excellent read and thank you for the thought



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thanks! I appreciate this, coming from a poet that I admire.
Jenn
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Well done here. Love "undeserved." I would say that love is always that way, and that is what makes it so special. Lucky you indeed. Great work.


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Forgot this.
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This is a really sweet take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest, thanks for commenting on mine as well.
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Nice
Very well written piece, my best wishes in the contest.

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