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How Long.

How long shall I hang upon the ropes?
Waiting for the puppet master to make the decision.
For I have danced their dances until all flesh
has fallen off of my bones.
Yet as flames of angry fires leap,
they still expect me to dance.
While I await the scissors to cut the ropes.
Better that my bones become dust,
than to continue this hateful dance.

Author notes

My husband has danced around with those suppose to be looking after his best interests in getting an electric wheel chair. He is falling and has hurt himself more than one time, while they think this gadget will help. To me it like being a puppet on a string.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    WOW!! What a great take on the prompt.
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Wandika gold member
    March 30, 2008
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    Soon

    I hope this is resolved. Tell Donny hello from me Judy.

    Jim


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    Powerful!!!

    I love the metaphorical imagery here...
    So much said in so few words...
    So profound, honest & vulnerable...
    Another great write you have here...
    Well done!!!