Her feet pound the tears come
Never as before
Now that she is free
She left her family
Never to return
Her feet pound against the road
Breathing hard
Never turning back
Running towards her fate
Destiny never has been so harsh
She runs ad runs
That girl is me
Please tell me what you think
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I agree with everyone else this poem is really good.
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This is great you should enter this in a contest! this is to surely get something. good job Leigh
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amazing great viswals in this one
exerlent!
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Ahhhh! Leigh! This is soooo good. But there is a typo in the second to last line, it should be and not ad. Not trying to be picky about typos, but here is this beautiful flowing poem and then suddenly there's a typo stuck in the middle of it. Anyway, very good poem. VERY good. I don't really know what to say.
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THIS ONE IS VERY GOOD
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Leigh...*hugs really tight* call me later tonight please i want to talk to you
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