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the not-so american dream.

freedom,two kids,and formidible job,a nice home
thus is the american dream.
things of the 60's
never to come true again,
fear,hate,conspiracy,
this spells out our nation
we're nearing the end
the war , global warming,
just two things out of millions.
when will it end?

ONLY TIME WILL TELL

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just thoiughts i wanted to get, out feel free to comment

do you think the end is coming?

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  • xXBipolarXx
    March 31, 2008
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    sammie :)

    this was very good and i feel the same. With whats happining in the world....only time will tell


  • P. W. Blackwell
    March 31, 2008

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    I like it

    very nice i like it a lot you everyone should understand this i mean with the way we live the world is going to end no one gives a crap
    very good keep up the great work
    Tori


  • XRainbowliciousX
    March 31, 2008
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    I think it is. I mean if you believe in the bible. But yeah about ur poem I like it b/c it tells about something thats real...I mean sure it could be better..but i like that u gave it the thought to say hey I'm going to write about something thats real.