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Freewrite : Camera

oh wait
there's the camera
flash bulbs and smiles
false happiness forever
frozen into black and white memories
commentaries, running monologues
wait i forget my lines.
was it he said or she said
i'm am not sure anymore
placid faces
misplaced graces.
walking down paths
already worn
lined with orange groves
there was a time when
we were hand in hand
but branches break
as your
mind wanders
the bulb flashes
back to camera cues
three
two
one
action....
fake smiles
forever frozen
into black and white memories.

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Freewrite 3 min
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Chelsea Reject's topic


Camera
Just Run With it

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