Come, let me wallow in you,
Rain-
For we are so akin.
Come, for only you understand me,
Only you know me,
Sweet, sweet rain,
Come pound on my window
Because no one else wants in,
Let me dance in you,
Cling to me
Because no one else will,
Roll down my face
Because the tears just won’t come,
Caress me
Because no one else will,
Slip through my hair,
Under my dress,
Be my love,
Happy, happy rain.
Come rescue me
From the depths of thunder,
The stabs of lightning,
We have been through these storms together
And this one too we shall weather,
But only if you come,
Glorious, glorious rain.
A contest entry
- pen me your lluvia by lluvia.
695 points, ended April 19, 2008, 8 entries
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525 points, ended April 22, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. Very nice. I love the imagery I get...
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Amazing personification here. I love how you gave life to the rain. Beautiful write!
Thank you for entering.
~lluvia
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goodness
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