there is no way to describe
the feeling of letting a lover
over power your body
a lover much larger and stronger than you
to give in your will
and allow them free reign over your body
the rush in being powerless and out of control
to take him inside of you
to open yourself
and let them touch what no one can have
the pure pleasure of sensitivity
the acceptance in knowing
that he is the man
and you are the woman
a pure defining of masculinity
and femininity
Author notes
not erotic but passionate.
A contest entry
- round contest #2 by serenity silvermoon.
420 points, ended March 31, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Passionate indeed. I am growing so fond of your poetry... you really have an amazing muse! This was just beautiful... your emotions were carried out very well in this and you expressed them with so much sincerity... very well done. I just adore this one. Good luck in the contest doll.
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