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You need not love me.

Spurn my offering at being
perceived unworthy
of the gift bestowed
upon your wounded heart.

Unvalued in blindness
unacquainted with purity
celebrants sigh
at the breadth
of the fullness expanded.

My best I give,
acceptance
unconditional
delivered
through me.

Simply
offered
in hopes
that you may see yourself
in the reflection

and in turn
accept yourself.

For by unconditional to you
the reflection is unconditional
and that dimension in which love
becomes trapped and labeled unrequited

vanishes

to free the winged soul
once bound by bars of fear

then soars to peace.

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    March 30, 2008

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    "...My best I give,
    acceptance
    unconditional
    delivered
    through me..."

    What greater gift...
    so directly expressed.

    "...to free the winged soul
    once bound by bars of fear

    then soars to peace."

    A perfect conclusion
    giving hope to love.

    A most thoughtful piece,
    stirring the imagination
    with the title and the theme.

    Aesthete


  • Lislaine
    March 29, 2008
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    waw

    really beautiful, you really have a talent! I loved it!
    Good luck in my contest