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His love

His love burns
scratching at my eyes, nose and ears
forcing my face into the pillow over and over
whispering the despair
pulverizing the skin
My heart aches for him
senses tingling in expectation
of his touch
but my mind doesnt understand
the pain
devestating anguish
seeping into the cracks
and crevices
tearing down my defenses
ripping me apart
with his words
his indiffrence
his hatred
his love

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  • JBudRos
    August 15, 2008
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    thats all i could afford i featured one of your poems and it cost me 164 points basically all of my points..lol your totally wort it though


  • JBudRos
    August 15, 2008

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    Im sorry my love you never did get to see the best of me...although at times I wouldn't have been able to breath without you