Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Pistachio

Tiny bud
With lips pursed
Your tulip-like concealment
Until the jaws are hinged
And you are vulnerable.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • celestial
    March 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    ooo

    I loved how you used the pistachio to give it a personalty-like. Not sure if it's even the right word. Very creative.