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Goodnight Flame

I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Can you feel the burning?
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Taste grease on your lips
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Breathe in my ashes
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Don’t look away from this

Look at me now, look at me
Did you really think you’d win?
Can you see now, do you see?
You know nothing of this sin

I revel in the fire you throw
Don’t hold back
The pain that’s felt you’ll never know
Hey mister colonel, think back

Do you remember?
Do you remember?

I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Can you feel the burning?
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Taste grease on your lips
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Breathe in my ashes
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Don’t look away from this

See their faces, in the fire’s glow
See the silhouettes of men you’ll never know
It’s too late now, it’s too bright
Through the flames I scream goodnight

Goodnight
Goodnight
Goodnight Flame

I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Can you feel the burning?
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Taste grease on your lips
I’m going up in flames (going up in flames)
Breathe in my ashes
I’m going up in flames (going up I flames)
Don’t look away from this

Don’t look away
Say goodnight
Goodnight Flame

Author notes

If you know what this is about... I love you. Obviously you can take from this what you will, but to me, it's written in the POV of Roy Mustang's victims and little Lust.

Colonel Roy Mustang - The Flame Alchemist from Fullmetal Alchemist. Watch the show! Read the manga!

xxx

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  • celestial
    March 29, 2008

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    I interpreted as a poem to spite or make a comeback on someone, but I like this poem nonetheless. You made good use of repetition. Good job.


    • Freedom comes
      March 30, 2008
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      Hey thanks aratidevi! I love it when people have their own interpretations of work, that makes it more personal to them. ya know? Thank you very much.

      xxx