Strings of energy
cobwebs of invisible connections
networking unsurpassed
between all of life
and the universe
major expressways of travel
impulses and thoughts
all woven together
touching
energizing
changing
electronic sparks
never-ending
all unseen
but yet well-known
by creation’s plan
bad contacts get broken
but they just rewire,
just create new avenues,
other directions
pathways to resolutions
rippling the responding universe
with vibrations
crystal fragments
shatter in illusion
as glistening stardust
sifts through
Author notes
aboomer
this is just really rough thoughts right now, but wanted to get something in while I had a chance. Will try to work with it later.
I am interested in this group. Right now, I might be hit/miss on things, but will try.
A contest entry
- Seeking members for a new poetry group....Check it out...Please by islekine.
705 points, ended April 1, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow...this is amazing! If these are your rough thoughts, whoa!! Congratulations on the Gold!
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Thank you Neon for reading and the lovely comment.
Yes, one of many writes I just whipped off my rough thoughts - meaning to get back and work with them, but didn't. Was thrilled when they took the Gold!
blessings
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you did an outstanding job on this poem. Congratulations on the gold trophy.
kat
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Thanks kat!! It was just rough thoughts, but with all going on I didn't get back to work with them...lol
blessings
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Truly beautiful..cobwebs connected, and stardust sifting through..lovely! Any quark would be honored to be so flawlessly described. Congratulations on your Gold.
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Thank you so much 'NeonRose' for reading, your wonderful comment and the applause on 'strands of life'. I am so pleased you enjoyed this.
best wishes
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Wow what GOLDEN rough thoughts huh....and such a true poem...we are all interconnected balls of energy...congrats
Rob..
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Thank you so much Rob!! I am pleased you enjoyed 'strands..'....just rough thoughts....I was surprised to receive the gold! Pleased, though!
blessings
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This is absolutely perfect!
The cobwebs as you put it, are connected!
Write on and on!
*PEACE*
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Thank you so much 'islekine' for your wonderful comment and applause on 'strands'. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Very rough thoughts and I would like to work with it more when I get a chance.
blessings
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as glistening stardust
sifts through
I love that! What an ending! Best of luck!!!
Az
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Thank you so much Az for your lovely comment and applause on 'strands'. I am very pleased you enjoyed it.
blessings
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I think this is rather good I always am like that with my poems working on them to make them better thanks for sharing much love
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Thank you so much Starz for your lovely comment on 'strands..'. I am pleased that you enjoyed it.
blessings
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