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Deceptions

The little tiny being.
Just makes it through the mossy woods.
He huffs and puffs and
Just then, realizes he has found a spring.

He heaves a sigh of relief.
And meanders towards the giant pool.
After his long journey through the forest, a swim sounded nice.
But when he touches the water it's cold.
It must be Winter, he thinks to himself.

He wades into the pool,
The great big, giant pool,
And he takes a swim.

But, all of the sudden,
There is a huge earthquake,
And the little pathetic being drowns in the pool.
But the last thing it heard was a booming voice..

"Wouldn't it be cool to be a bug like those?"

And he thinks,
"Oh, you guys have no idea," 

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Comments welcome. Emma and I had this thing the other day and i said i would post this idea we came up with.

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  • stardust3492
    March 30, 2008
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    This is awesome! lol its really cute


  • DeadlyTurnip
    March 29, 2008
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    Lol nice idea I liked this, it was interesting and cute


  • BonaFidePoet
    March 29, 2008

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    YAAAAAAAY!! Sorry I never got around to writing it, but i'm glad you did!! Ahhhh its awesome! GO LITTLE RED MOSS BUGS!!!


  • StarIlluminated
    March 29, 2008
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    haha so this is about a bug? it's really cool I like it a lot! , good idea!
    *KT*