A light above a head,
of a great inventor,
DING.
An idea.
I'd give ideas,
in their heads,
when they have nothing,
to invent,
I will give them an idea!
Albert Einstein,
the creator of me!
i would give him all,
his ideas.
Author notes
A LIGHTBULB!!!!!!
A contest entry
- Instead of a Human... by Rianna Bear.
600 points, ended April 17, 2008, 14 entries
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stange! person you r!
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i wish that i had more of you above my head more often! this was cool!! i really liked your concept and that it was actually something positive!! thanks for sharing and for your entry!
*Rianna
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Great job! 1 suggestion: in line 12 you use a lower case i and the rest of the time you use a uppercase I...you might want to fix that. Interesting idea..good job and good luck in the contest!
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Before I read this I was in the dark, now I've seen the light brilliantly!!!
Well Done!!!!
laurie
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