She goes by no particular name
She walks with no companion
When she walks she never stops
There is nowhere for her to go
Because there is no love for her to live by
Her world has nothing, its pure fogginess and emptiness
More than anything she wants to fly away like a bird
She is afraid to ask for help
Because no one answers her cries
She wonders into oblivion
By each step she falls into more oblivion
Each step she is even more lost in her world
She doesn't seem to control her actions
It is like she is connected to strings like a puppet
And she is controlled by.....Lost emotions
She trips over lost memories and Emotions
Breaking them along the way
Though her last fall is her last
And this time it turns out to be different from the rest
She falls back into the real world that she left many years ago
When she cries for help
She is heard
Author notes
This write is all fiction I made up trying to use creativity,I am kind of tired of writing about just my life,and my thoughts on the world.
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Amazing
This goes to show those people who think that there is no one out there to listen to them, because they block out everyone and everything; that there really are people out there who will love you and listen. This is very deep, and insightful, and amazing. I loved it absolutely. I will read more of yours.
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That's a great poem. Very sad but i loved it. keep writing, your very good at it
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i loved it!
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wow. asking if i liked it was kinda, weak. i LOVED IT!! this was soooo good and very deep. yes it was. and it was easily flowing too... all around just a wonderful poem xD
thanks for sharing!
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The deepness of that write was breath taking! Awesome write!
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that was actually pretty creative. i liked it and i especially like how you made your character heard at the end. it was wonderful!
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Welcome to AllPoetry
The depth in this is just fantastic, I felt it all from beginning to end.
This kind of write is written alot, I confess I do as well, however you have gone beyond the 'cliche' and taken this to a new level
I especially enjoy the strength and imagery of your final two lines
♥
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Stay safe
~Manda
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