She walks around with false happiness
Her body is abused and misunderstood
The scars on her wrist are a reminder of her past
The blood is proof that the present is reality
And the drugs in her veins are her future
Which is inevitable demise
She cannot continue in the non existance of life
She smiles but only feels pain
She laughs but her soul bleeds for him
His touch is all she needs
The sensuality of his fingers comforts her
And she can't get it back
Her heart aches for the taste of his lips
The first thought when she wakes up is his face
And she wishes to wake up to it again
She made a mistake
But she can't admit it
Without him, life is not complete
Her soul is alone in the world again
But she knows nothing else now
She tries to move on but can't
She can't get him out of her heart
So instead she closes her eyes
Let the final tear fall
And softly whisper "I love you"
A contest entry
- Pain/Hurt/Life scars. Release your pain to me by LanguishedLad.
450 points, ended April 24, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Diamond Eye's by Dark Prince Chaos.
660 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me I'm wrong n I don't need him
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aww sorry if your going through this my heart indeed goes out to you. A very powerful and emotional write. It's a shame so many people relate to this myself included. I hope and wish you well
great job keep writing helps release all that leftover pain
take care -
Many people know this feeling all too well and you've done a wonderful job expressing it in this poem.
I can personally relate to the girl in this and it simply jerks my heart to read such a beautifully painful piece.
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quite a beautifull write i loved it this poem showed such emoshon and the read was great perfect write thnx -bow's- (*)
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oh i love it great poem!!!
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I like this only because it was original. Its obvious that you didn't have to force these words or emotions and i admire that. Although, the flow was a little off.
Great write over all. My favorite line was, "She smiles but only feels pain". I can relate to that all too well. Keep writing. Stay strong.
Peace, Love and Positive Vibes,
Miss Jaymie
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