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Angry Me

I am always angry
Angry about what have been caged inside
People hurting my feelings
calling me names
I am never happy what a big shame
I try and try to be friends with every body else
I really try hard sometimes
But sometimes they won't  accept me

I try and try and try

And still nothing comes out of it

Sometimes kids even try t o beat me up

They laugh above it

And they know I am going to make a big fuss

They always think it is so funny making me angry, mad, and sad

Why do they always pick on me

Why can't they all just see

I always get angry when they tease me

Thats why all my feelings are caged inside

Especialy some good feelings

I never tell any one whats going on in my life

I try to fight it

And I try to hide

Why can't people just accept me for who I am

If they all just get to know me

And see how good of a person I am

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Comments

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  • Silly Rabbit.
    April 15, 2008

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    I hate it when a person is forced to bottle up their emotions. And especially when the good are treated so wrongly.
    I was touched by this piece. I, too, was picked on as a young child, and I couldn't stand it.
    But even if I hadn't already experienced it, I know that I could have by just reading this. Such a powerful poem you've written here...
    Keep up the good work


  • paperparadox silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    Well this is a fantastic way to deal with feeling angry and resentful. Get it all out on to paper (or in this case, on to the screen!).

    I have to say that for an eleven year-old, you write with great maturity ~ I was intrigued by a comment you left on one of my pieces, so had to come and have a look ~ and I'd like to encourage you strongly to continue on your poetic journey. You have a great future ahead of you.

    Keep that pen moving!

  • wessxxx
    April 9, 2008
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    nice

    loved it


  • passionate-poet
    April 8, 2008

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    so many poeple are judgemental im sorry youve had to deal with this keep your head up one day people will learn better


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 5, 2008

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    Very good that you write to get rid of feelings like this - not sure if it was just for this contest or not, but you have expressed your sentiments very well. Many young kids make fun of others because they are different; they like to make themselves feel better too - by putting own someone, it kind of builds them up, and many join in, even if they do not agree, but just to belong to a group. It is good to write about this, and get it out, so as not to keep it inside and let it fester and make you angrier. Keep writing. easy to red and understand what you write about in these lines.


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 5, 2008

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    Lovely Poem

    This was very heartfelt. I can feel the pain you write with. Keep writing about how you feel. I do and it really helps to get it out. I hope you find some peace in your writing too.

    Bless you,
    Sandy


  • longlife
    March 30, 2008

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    AWW! I really felt the vibe of sadness in your poem but i think if you were mad you should have made a rage kind of vibe but i felt like i could really feal what you were fealig and saying and there was just wonderful moments keep writing fantastic job

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.
    Good luck.
    Brian


  • xxhoopstar21xx
    March 29, 2008
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    GREEEEAT

    wow grl! this is great!

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