This house smells like rain
Sometimes it reminds me of spring storms
And sleeping beneath God's endless face
I can feel my skin tighten
And that makes me feel…
Oh, that makes me feel so strange
Your chest moves slowly,
Like the mountains walk at night,
And we wake to find them
Outside of our doorsteps
Wanting to hold us close
And that makes me feel…
Oh, that makes me feel so loved
These thoughts take me in circles
My dreams take me home
To this path that follows me
Yet tells me where to go
And I smile and follow
And that makes me feel…
Oh, that makes me feel…
So fucking good,
That I feel strange for feeling anything at all
Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- Beauty of Springtime ~ quotes Inspired by m2lost24get.
550 points, ended March 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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springtime gentle rains have an energizing feel upon the spirit as the aroma breathes life into the soul. Love exudes such sensory experiences emotionally joyous. the write was well done - i would suggest changing the f word to something more appropriate if you ever enter this into any other write as it saddens the heartfelt warmth of the rest of the write. well written as being outdoors in nature in springtime with life and hope reborne is exhuberating to the mind, body and soul. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx
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