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Lacking Eyes to See (Autobiographical)

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Hollowed chimes caught

within a circling cycle

of unmoving air space,

waiting for wind's caress

that would allow quiet songs

to burst forth

from Spring's unearthly silence.

Butterflies circling, confused

by the daunting dearth of fragile flowers

erupting from hardened, hallowed soil;

a haunting lack of rain harvesting

tattered wings, spiralling

with sorrow as they fall,

subdued.

Gentle voice of Hope

wildly whispering:

 

"Wait ~ never surrender delightful dreams,

the dance of grandeur invading your slumber

even when you cannot sleep

from humidity surrounding your skin,

rising like sultry steam."

Tornado's tempest & sea's soothing shoreline ~

granted grace & refusal of radiance ~

torrid gestures & stormy secrets unveiled

by understanding ~

volcanic verse & molten music ~

the Poet is all of this

& so much more...








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This picture is of me at age 21, in 1979




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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    {nodding at your words}

    Gosh, I remember being 21. A gentle and revealing poem. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    Beautiful poetry as always...It always takes just a few lines to pull me right into your world. Lovely penning and I remember those young days of 1979!!! I was just graduating High School...to go back and do it all over again, I'd do it the same Loved your words, beautifully written as always ~Tia

  • Rowan gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    You're more, so much more!!!!

    I agree, sweet one, you were one of the first poets on Ap to greet me, open arms, open-heart and smile. You also made it you're mission to introduce to me others, like Rob, Robin, Nicolette, and so many others. I never felt alone here; your light was always on. You've been a mentor, a unfailing spellchecker, a muse-poker, inspiration giver, and above all, a friend. Thank you so much for retaining the qualities in your poetry, and most of all, in yourself. I've always said you have a poetic consistency that astounds me. Thank you, Wanda, my friend.

    Love you
    Kathleen


    • Night Hope gold member
      March 31, 2008
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      You are just the sweetest thing, Kathleen. Thank you so much for your thoughtful words, my Friend. I'm glad to have been here (in whatever capacity) for you, Sweetie. I never, ever poked ya, though. Although you've poked ME a few times. I appreciate ya, Lady...more than I could ever say. Love you right back, Sweetie.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 30, 2008
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    A well written poem of you, feelings, images and all.
    Buddy


  • transcendental baby gold member
    March 30, 2008

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    Oh yes, that's you ... never letting the winter choke the Spring


  • marc creamore
    March 29, 2008

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    A beautiful photo, a beautiful poem . . . Swan, you look and sing tonight with a deep radience that only the soul of poet can reflect. Perfect as always . . . love. Marc


  • arafura gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    "the Poet is all of this
    & so much more..."

    Yes so much more Wanda! The 21 year old in the picture has "grown up" nicely!


  • Allyce May gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    WOW! I want those freakin' glasses, they are banging! Hee hee. Awwww, you look so lovely in that picture

    Onwards to the poem! I loved the ending, it tied everything together so well; I am not surprised that when you wrote an autobiographical piece you chose to write about the life and emotions of a poet, for that is what you are

    "waiting for wind's caress
    that would allow quiet songs
    to burst forth
    from Spring's unearthly silence."

    Just lovely - it is always worth the read when your songs burst forth



  • Randomly Beautiful
    March 29, 2008

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    So far I am so happy I decided to do this. You never cease to amaze me lady. Exactly what I was looking for again.


  • individuality gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    aye, so much more indeed, fluttered breath that roams the light and the dark in life's roads, a good piece of poetry

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