A rose between two thorns -
It's no wonder she's getting stabbed
or maybe it's the lactic acid running through her veins
as she chases lost cause after lost cause
getting lost herself
She's lost herself
between rocks and hard places
and familiar faces
but hey - what doesn't kill us can only make us stronger.
Author notes
Hm. Wrote this off of an experience from a while ago...not my finest and emo-er than my usual but enjoy, and more importantly, scrutinize.
Note: Prompt #4
A contest entry
- Short Love Poems by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great work. Good imagery
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I love it. short and sweet but very eloquent.
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