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Play me Again (cause I bend to you)

Missing image

Thoughts surround me
wrapping my soul
to remains of torture
and I,

           breaking
to their will,

decay.

Placed to their wants
taking from me,

                    needs
as the will in me
[left the weak]
 and ran through open doors

As the puppet master
     dwindles the strings
         with a broken finger
his ghostly appearance
[in pasts]

where we were love
has abandoned me
but,


still pulling my strings

with my stolen will.

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  • paulcreates silver member
    April 5, 2008
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    I know this feeling all too well. Nicely done!
    Thanks for entering.
    Paul


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    WOW!!! Excellent take on the picture.
    Well done and thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • letters to no one
    March 30, 2008
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    Haunting,
    Disturbing,
    Beautiful.