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2 AM (haiku)

Okay, just award
the points to me already:
it's two and I'm tired!

A contest entry

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    So straight up and forward! I liked it, made me laugh It sounds like something I'd write

    Thanks for sharing,
    Keep up the good work!
    Claire x


  • Shadow of a Crow
    April 3, 2008
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    lol--forward, direct, and honest.
    what more does this guy want?


  • Pollycheck
    March 29, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my haiku contest.

    Okay, just award
    the points to me already:
    it's two and I'm tired!

    This is very funny andit made me laugh, but it is not a haiku. The only characteristic of a haiku that this poem has is the sylllable count.


  • twaintwine
    March 29, 2008
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    You've Got Some Nerve!

    You can't just write a poem demanding points! Who do you think you are?? No one here thinks you are very funny. The only good laugh is listening to your music at www.nakedadam.net
    So what if you are famous in Hawaii? Get real, brah!