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"Raindrop in the Sea"

Trickling down from this heavenly sky,
Lost in the vast seas unnatural high.
Splash, and this rain drop is lost on the sea
Indistinguishable from the water it used to be.

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  • Peachy
    March 30, 2008
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    wow!
    You did so much with such a hard prompt! I really like this one, it says so much and it rhymes beautifully!
    Good Luck!


  • Peachy
    March 29, 2008

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    Your prompt is....
    a raindrop in the sea or a fish in a sea full of sharks, take your pick
    Good Luck!