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The Moment in Color

Missing image
Curious layers
of tissue thin illusion,
baby blue to cerulean,
wrap memories in seclusion.


Silken sheets
of translucent paper,
soft pink to hot fuschia,
heat remembrance to vapor.


Colored papers
of handmade fiber,
ochre to burnt sienna,
burn the ink of the inscriber.


Fragile surfaces
of memories restraints,
ocean aqua to brilliant turquoise,
blend to reality as the mind paints.


Memeories as distant as decades
merge with those of recent hours,
shy violet to passionate plum,
bowing to reality's powers.


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Author notes

The artist paints, dreams---and lives---in color,
a tapestry merged of then and the powerful now.

Words come alive when answered in kind.

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Comments

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  • Gaze silver member
    June 19
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    As I said, bright aquarelles! Paint on Miss MC

  • Gaze silver member
    June 18

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    It feels just great when we can connect colour with words. Actually I think every letter we write has a special and particular hue. Sometimes thy aren't there to see but to feel. Here, I got to use the sense of sight and perception of what is painted beyond the verses.
    You are pretty much like a painter of bright aquarellas, where pastel colours become intense colours.
    That is what you do when you write


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 18

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      Ah, you, perceptive one, add so much insight to
      the commentary---the thought exchange!

      Thank you!

      M-C

  • bozoloper silver member
    March 31

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    you must have great love for your work, you describe it with almost as much detail as you must put into it. i like how you worked in the memories of life, while still focusing on the topic at hand.


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      April 1
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      Yes, boz, I do get quite wrapped up in it,
      literally as I had been making poofy tissue
      wrappings for some small birthday gifts for
      a friend. Analogies forming in my mind...

      Thank you for your perceptive words.

      Aesthete

  • Olivia33
    March 29
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    Great

    Ooh; I like the picture!

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 30
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      Hi, Olivia.
      I was thinking about layering
      colored tissue to create
      a collage, then scan it,
      but this was so dynamic,
      courtesy of Photobucket!

  • sunchaser silver member
    March 29
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    Lovely poem to compliment the image...color...


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 29
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      Mary, don't you just love it
      when the right image is found
      just as one sees it in the mind?
      You always have the greatest
      illustrations for your words!!!

      Nice to see you here,

      Aesthete

  • FransB silver member
    March 29

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    I took the final lines of each of your stanzas, and in mind's eye, poemed my own. I do not now if this was your intention, but it does accentuate both the title and the words in your author's notes. I enjoyed this write. Frans


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 29
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      Aha! Observant one!
      I often relate stanza to stanza,
      the order of the lines, in my mind.
      Sometimes this is seen,
      but you captured this on first sight.
      THANK YOU!!!!

      Aesthete
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