Carved into intricate simplicity
Hacked at with jails of creativity
Smothered in dreams of reality
Put on tenuous lines of golden filigree.
Smoothed out in porcelains brittle beauty
Perfected with lines of padded symmetry
Removed from all feelings of superiority
To present this disposable popular poetry.
A contest entry
- Oltre- A Struggle to 100 by neel pakhi.
1000 points, ended April 7, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful wording and an interesting view. Good luck in the contest!
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YES! Short and tiny packing a whole lot of good stuff.... Awesome.
I love the title. The rhyme and flow are kick butt. (in my world that means real good!)
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Short and sweet. Good luck
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FallenAngel09
Nice write great rhyming Goodluck
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Ha! Great ending. The rhyme scheme worked well. Diction was excellent also. The oxymorons were interesting. Enjoyed it! Thanks for entering.
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