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Burning

I have come the selfsame path
To the selfsame door,
Years have left the roses there
Burning as before

While I watch them in the wind
Quick the hot tears start,
Strange so frail a flame outlasts
Fire in the heart.

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  • whatever666
    April 14, 2008
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    short but to the point. i love it.


  • ml12
    April 6, 2008
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    Good flow, nice use of images and a good overall piece. Thank you