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MISmatch

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grief and laughter
sweetly bitter


. A competition entry for 5 words only for mismatch.

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 30, 2008
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    WOW!! Intense..

    pri


  • Gwenevere
    March 29, 2008
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    Laughter that hides the pain.Well done, Ros


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 29, 2008
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    Belter!!!


    • Bazza
      March 29, 2008
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      Belter ... less better ??

      Belter Typo for better ?
      Belter Beats the others ?
      Belter Runs like the devil ?
      Belter A runaway horse ?
      Belter Excess gas after a drink or good dinner ?
      Belter Someone who belts people with a haggis ?
      Belter Something like a bolter ?
      Aaaaw thanks anyway Mairi ....... That mean you liked it ???
      Bazza


      • Mairi bheag gold member
        March 29, 2008

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        Cracker, beezer, corker, buster, blazer, smasher, dog's b*ll*cks, bee's knee's, er...

        ... fair dinkum.


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    This is such a great take on the prompt. You have really done well here and I enjoyed the line "sweetly bitter". Well done and all the best for the contest.

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