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grief and laughter
sweetly bitter
. A competition entry for 5 words only for mismatch.
A contest entry
- THE PROMPT CHALLENGE # 2 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW!! Intense..
pri
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Laughter that hides the pain.Well done, Ros
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Belter!!!


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Belter ... less better ??
Belter Typo for better ?
Belter Beats the others ?
Belter Runs like the devil ?
Belter A runaway horse ?
Belter Excess gas after a drink or good dinner ?
Belter Someone who belts people with a haggis ?
Belter Something like a bolter ?
Aaaaw thanks anyway Mairi ....... That mean you liked it ???
Bazza
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Cracker, beezer, corker, buster, blazer, smasher, dog's b*ll*cks, bee's knee's, er...
... fair dinkum.
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This is such a great take on the prompt. You have really done well here and I enjoyed the line "sweetly bitter". Well done and all the best for the contest.
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