morning
brings misty rain
refreshing colors spent
nature takes pleasure in delight
fasting
Author notes
I used the syllable counter.
In a list
A contest entry
- Cinquain FUN by ckwriter69.
950 points, ended April 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Of course
I did . . . just to ease my mind, when fingers cannot react to thought and sound! Blessings. Frans -
Chuckle...
You didn't really need a counter did you Frans? 
Yes, so true, fasting brings us the reality of the pleasure of being full! 
Like this a lot. 
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So cute.
Sometimes you must keep your mind out of poetry completely ... do you know?
LOL to Ian.
Your nature writes are really, really a treat. Thank you, Poet.
Edengroete
Myra
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Ah, restraint
yeilding pleasure!
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do not use a syllable coutner use your mind
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Thanks!
Next time I will. Had a peek at your page, and if you have no problem with my request, I'll like to add you to my favourites list? Frans
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Good job. Syllable count is correct and the form is good. I enjoyed the last line, it is like fasting. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck.
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