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But you don't see me, you don't

"And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean she didn't fall asleep crying. And even though she acts like nothing's wrong, maybe she's just really good at lying."


A cat scratch to black tears
Abandoned under my escaped fears
Pull the covers to hide the sobs I hold dear

Tempting to Hide the pain I feel
Sins breaking into whats far too real
Devils hand shaken with a stubborn deal

Speaking the truth only to be shot down
Fake smiles For which I carry around
Blood drops to stain the tattered ground

Weakened by the game I so long to play
Touching others for good memories to stay
eruption of laughter at the things I say

Walking blankly with a smile that shouldn't be
Crawling into a corner head held by my knees
Wishing for happiness and to, for once,just be me

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"And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean she didn't fall asleep crying. And even though she acts like nothing's wrong, maybe she's just really good at lying."

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  • he broke me
    March 29, 2008

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    thanx for the entry and good luck in the contest.

    "Tempting to Hide the pain I feel
    Sins breaking into whats far too real"
    i loved this poem it was really good... these were my favourite lines.

    xxx he broke me