Time without interval
Crosscurrents absent
Chattering sea calmed
without wind blowing
Within me
Thoughts do not arise
Action cease
No ground to break
“Pure bliss”
extends unlimited space
"A road"
Unhindered in traffic jams
All space and time
at once disposal,
everything finds right place
yet infinite space left intact
path not laid
only opens up,
When thoughts are shed
effortlessly as autumn leaves,
"Boundaries"
time and space create,
Leave no trace in trail
Author notes
Aloneness is all in one
A contest entry
- Me time by Purush.
550 points, ended March 29, 2008, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a great poem with excellent imagery and I love the message that you are trying to put across. Well done.
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a wonderful and metaphoric way to speak about the bliss springing from transcendance of time and space ... embracing the pathless path to the unknown, gazing within and realizing that there is no one home ... what a joy ...
so few dare to look the "I" into the "eye" ... is emptiness really so scary ?
thank you for sharing this inspiring verse with me,
maa
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All the best to you--
exciting verse with noble presentation
very well said
all the best in my contest
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