Squirrels giggle
at hot pink soap bubbles
and
blatant psychoticism.
Distorted proportions
induce hilarity as such
that I've never seen before...
Utter idiocy
tickles funny bones
in jellyfish
spangled across the heavens.
Dipped in chocolate sauce,
and rubbed into
faceless corporate entities...
Tiny coloured gems
create pure fantasies
as we float into the distance
minds a-mush
Author notes
As title barely suggests, this is based on the sense held by cartoons.
Aim: Abstract and bizaare.
Eh? Aye?
I don't think it's funny though...
Critique welcome, and
Enjoi
^.^
A contest entry
- Make Me Laugh by pointlessdayz.
475 points, ended April 20, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honestly, now....
Comments
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It made a nice smile. It's random so that definately made me giggle...jelly fish with bones, haha!
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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