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you're loosing yourself

so if you think nothing goes right
and people see everything but the light
chances are you're loosing yourself
and if the laughs that made it worth while
seem to change and form a frown instead of a smile
chances are you've lost yourself
but if the tears can't flow
and there's no reason to let go
chances are you've found what I've lost

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  • Neha Kaushik
    March 29, 2008

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    Amazing.. I loved the way you've portrayed your emotions here.. so true and deep.. Thanx for sharing.. Loved reading it..