sworn to secrecy
lips molded
with satan's whispering truths
concealed only by
needle and thread
A contest entry
- Suicide Stories by Little Miss Mental.
400 points, ended March 31, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Beauty In Pain! by bangbaby.
300 points, ended June 18, 2008, 91 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that was simply amazing dear.
you took this one away great work! -
Good imagery
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Very creepy lines, but very appropriate for my contest, thankx
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wow good write perfect for the contest, keep up the great writing and best of luck in the contest. I can see a trophy comming your way with this write.
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Whoa very sinister and dark indeed, a most worthy entry. Best of luck in the contest.
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Great write!! does complete justice to the picture you've posted.. good luck.. Thanx for sharing.. *Blessings*
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