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Angel's Weary Flight

Angels burdened flight
journey in evils plight.
Mortal worlds misguided directions,
holy spirits toiled transitions,
soil purities white wings
changing with mundanes ugly things.
Landing wearily in clouds of air
in sojourns coveting arms repair.

Driven by compassions to save,
turn tides from Satan's evil wave.
Angel's embattled struggle for right
fighting sinners in dark of night,
finds peace above
in heavens arms of love.

 

 

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SILVER

Picture Peompt; 65 words exactly
artwork by Luis Royo

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 1, 2008
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    dark and an interesting piece thanks for entering


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    April 15, 2008

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    This is a very nice piece the Rhyme and flow is very smooth.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.


  • PageTurner
    April 11, 2008

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    GOLD worthy, Indeed!




    "finds peace above
    in heavens arms of love."


    Don't ya jus' Love it I do, Poet!

    ~ Nicky♥


  • getsbetter
    April 11, 2008

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    Xlnt, Xlnt write roaddog wolf! Congrats on gold, much deserving my friend. Rhyme and choice of words were outstanding...GETS


  • ShelleyA gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Good title. 65 words exactly. Very good interpretation on the picture prompt. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice descriptives and rhythm. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. A very good story poem. Thank you for your entry.


  • dustookie2
    March 29, 2008

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    Oh this is a great picture prompt to work from kudos to the host. The lines and words just roll from the lips and to get the best from this piece to hear the words and feel the rhythm it should be read aloud ...offers much more than just reading it. Penned with your rhyme pattern and trademark style. Good luck in the contest.

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