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What is the essence of a poetess

 

 

What is the essence of a poetess.

Her spirit free, released, listing.

Waves of gentle currents whisper softly to her soul.

One tender stroke will uplift a flow of tender grace.

 

Filling, caressing her flesh with inspiration,

and  yearning lungs with mighty breath.

Upon the sea of poetry she glides

among the depths.

 

Thirsting to surface,

the beauty that she beholds.

The echoes of a fearless heart,

the power of her soul  at last...

 

released.

 

 

 

 

 

 

talented artistry of glittergraphics.com

 

 

Author notes

Sai...I wrote this to inspire you.
I could hear a very bold spirit in you
yearning to let yourself release.

I saw this picture, and it too filled me with courage.
Sometimes amid the deep waters of poetry, we find ourselves silent, and that is okay...it means it's time
to simply, read, listen and learn from the other souls
that inspire us so deeply.

i hope you liked it.

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  • Ale E
    May 29, 2008

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    Wow. This was very good, i'm glad you requested me to read this!! I really do love this. Very good imagery and this totally does tie in with my poem Paula. Thanks for the read.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 6, 2008
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    I love this poem as well, you have a good knack with poetrylol


  • stavykm gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    Excellent

    Wow I loved this poem very much. The imagery and the meaning is so heart felt. I just was taken in by every word you wrote here. Just brilliant really and the picture is neat but the poem stands brilliantly on its own. Thank you for sharing with me,.
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Sia
    April 14, 2008

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    Thank you for entering ^_^

    Thank you so much for this poem, I loved it. There are really no words to express how greatful I am for your words. This was a truly inspiring poem, and it is a jewel to have in my contest. All the luck to you @>}-


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    What a wonderful presentation - great picture and lovely poem all together on this page. Well thought out these words - they flow and share a great message about where words come from - great metaphor used here.


  • Elle Kaye
    March 31, 2008

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    Wow

    This is reallt beautiful. One of the best poems i have read in a long time! I really loved reading it. I thought it was a fantastic interpretation of the graphic.

    "The echoes of a fearless heart,

    the power of her soul at last...



    released"

    Such a powerful part of this piece. I wish i could get the words i write to stir emotion in others like this did in me,

    Great job.
    You are one fine poet


  • CountryCousin
    March 30, 2008

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    Perfect description.

    I like that graphic and well you have come up with a perfect description I believe. Another inspiring write to read after a hard day's work.


  • KayJay
    March 29, 2008

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    What a terrific encouragement you have wrought... well penned and thoughtful, I feel as if I've been allowed to glimpse into you as well. Perhaps this is personal as well? Whatever the case, you've done well.
    K


  • Endeavor gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    Excellent


    Thirsting to surface,
    the beauty that she beholds.
    The echoes of a fearless heart,
    the power of her soul at last...

    released.

    Beautiful perponderance
    You are a poet

    Very nice

    Rick


  • Lucy.
    March 29, 2008
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    beautiful... 'released', well said, I love it.


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 28, 2008

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    This is amazing.. each line is so captivating and the picture goes very well with what you've portrayed.. Good luck.. Thanx for sharing..

  • ScreamingConfession
    March 28, 2008
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    Wow, the picture and the poem are so beautiful. Great work!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 28, 2008

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    wow that is pretty love the flow especially last stanza back,surface, might wanna fix the comma here. Good luck. Very nice!!


  • Angelflower
    March 28, 2008

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    This was really really good. I liked the image that you created with your words..
    Good luck grandmother!! haha..
    Peace to you and lots of love..
    Jetleena

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