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in-gluped in their words of pain

dead and broken
lying helplessly on a broken tree
will anybody ever find me?

my back is broken
i can't move a bone

i've been in-gulped
in their branches
they won't let me go

i just can't escape
from this terrible place
i will lie here forever
until i rest in my grave

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 3, 2008

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    what a scary thought.
    This is a great take on the picture and thank you
    for entering my contst.


    Delila